you

You held your ground

When I was down

You saw me through 

When no one knew

You held ah light

When I was far from sight

You took my pain

With nothing to gain 

I lost all faith 

I couldn't wait 

Sometimes I close 

My eyes 

And just memorize 

About the times

You held me near

You made me smile

Without even trying

Now tell my something

What could have been

If I had just let in

Why am i scared to

take advise

And do things right?

Let's just forget the 

Past ,try this

Time to make things last

I'm tired of crying

Tired of fighting, 

The fact i want you back  

Author's Note

w0w this just came out of nowhere ..comment and tell me what you think :) thanks!

Reviews

[Charles]

It's a nice measure of appreciation for someone who was there for you. Nice read.

[David W Moore III]

teh feelings are well represented not as sure about the dashes in tr-yin and some-thin, but otherwise nice piece

[Aven]

"I'm tired of crying
Tired of fighting"

these were by far the most impactful words. you can work a little more on your use of words, but its still a nice poem. :)

[Julie Beth]

i thinks its amazing great job

[momo]

the flow seems a lil rough..but then again you could be a rapper like me dawg! ^.^ ohhohoh! anyways the emotion is clearly expressed through here so keep up the great work! very nice piece!