hot pink

Could you take 

a walk in my

stilettos a mile

or two

imagine nine

inch heels

built on pain

just there high

and tall with 

nothing to gain

every where she goes

she leaves

 a vibrant stain

the vivid hot 

pink faded with

age,hit too many 

times with the element 

of rain

worn down to

the soles 

but still she

 doesn't foreclose

been to hell  

and back , 

she never gives 

in even when 

under attack...

Author's Note

0_o i'm not really a big fan of shoes ...this was just one of those poems that just happen.

Reviews

[Aven]

I never understood why people walk in those shoes. ;)

[Charles]

Nice flow. I could help but get stuck on the thought of a woman in nine inch heels (and then get caught thinking about nine inch nails). Good read.

[Julie Beth]

im not one for shoes either i would reather just walk around barefoot but great job :)

[momo]

and they happen so well.. very impressive once again!