me

my very first poem <3

Trying to stand tall head up high 
but this thing called gravity keeps pulling me down 
trying to see the light ,but i am surrounded in darkness 
is like a never ending tunnel ,is like a million to one 

but still i rise still i shine 
my motivation success my fear failure 
love for money i aint stopping now 
been here to long i think i see the light everyone speaks about 

then again my mind might be playing tricks on me
now i'm frustrated  

exaggeration,hyperventilating my mind exploding

its all over now,pitch black game over

i'm back where i started 

no where close to the end

just the beginning 

Author's Note

hope you enjoyed reading!

Reviews

[momo]

did you have withdrawals from the soda again..lol jk its a great poem! life is so full of twists and turns and youve captured it perfectly well done!

[David W Moore III]

Nice but maybe you took a wrong turn in the tunnel. Defined success incorectly. Quested for tge wrong treasure behind door number three. When all you needed was that ragged curtain. Very thoughtful for a first poem