This Is Me.

I used to be the one to put my business out there, now it's nowhere. 
You can ask about me, but you'll always hear nothing. 
That's just how it is, how I chose to live.

You think I'm perfect, I make no mistakes.

My life's not the one you'd want to take.

I do more than you know.
More than what's shown.
I'm me, take it or leave it.

You'll never achieve this. 
That's a threat, a promise. 

I'm always honest. 

Reviews

[Scott S]

What is apparent in your writing, is that you are going through some tough times. For that reason alone, I really encourage you to continue to pen more works. I have been writing since I was about thirteen years old, and it is something that never gets old. You will continue to develop your style as you write through the years, and your style may change somewhat as you go along through life. Your writing speaks from your heart...and if you can capture that emotion on paper, and get it across to your readers, you are already ahead of some writers. I have been away from the Cafe, after taking a lengthy hiatus, but now that I am back, I look forward to seeing more of your work, and watching it evolve. Chillsea, I truly encourage you in your writing, and I hope that things take a positive turn for you.

[Wolfwind Words]

People are the sum of their experiences. Everyday that you've lived and walked upon the journey that is called life has, shaped, molded and tempered you. While moments upon that road have been filled with potholes and mudslides, those moments have taught you lessons non-the-less. She that is you today, is the result of everything that has happened, both good and bad. This piece shows that there have been those that see only the outside of that which is you and in doing such, they've been unable to truly understand the spirit and soul inside. This piece shows that you know that you are unique due to the life that you've led. This piece also shows that there is a part of the person that fears what people may think and is reserved, while there is another side that knows honesty is the best policy and people will just have to deal.

Your poem is well titled, as these words do give us a glimpse of what and who you are. Thanks for sharing this window into that which is you.

Wolfie