The Things You Never Knew

The Things You Never Knew

A Poem by chillsea

Everything I do reminds me of you.
I dont know how to push past this.
My hearts breaks the fastest.
I still love you.
Believe it or not.
You're my only thoughts.
Pray to god you'll come back one day, maybe, Hopefully.
Shed some light on the situation, make some recommendation.
Show me that you care, prove you'll still be there.
Negative images fill my head, words I wish weren't said.
Let's flash forward to a few years later, nothing will matter except the both of us.

© 2011 chillsea


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While this is a common flow of thought after a break up or emotional event. The form of the piece it self tells us the outcomes. The more energy we place on those if's of chance, that life throws at us, the heavier the burden becomes upon ourselves. See the form... It's narrow at the top, yet squishy wide and flat at the bottom.. More pressure on the heart and soul, which in most cases probably isn't healthy, even if thinking about such things is a quick fix to the sorrow.

Keep writing on into a better sunset!

Wolfie

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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While this is a common flow of thought after a break up or emotional event. The form of the piece it self tells us the outcomes. The more energy we place on those if's of chance, that life throws at us, the heavier the burden becomes upon ourselves. See the form... It's narrow at the top, yet squishy wide and flat at the bottom.. More pressure on the heart and soul, which in most cases probably isn't healthy, even if thinking about such things is a quick fix to the sorrow.

Keep writing on into a better sunset!

Wolfie

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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chillsea
chillsea

Elizabeth City, NC



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I'm a country girl, I write mainly poetry. I play Soccer & I enjoy singing. I love Pepsi with a straw (had to be creative) I'm in honors English classes. I'm used to be daddy's girl. more..

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A Poem by chillsea