A Heart Don't Break Even

To tell you the truth, I honestly wish these feelings would seize and just leave.

They’re burdening me.

Deep inside, just killing and mending what it seems.

Tearing apart my every mean.

Lift my head and full fill my dreams.

Kill everything that’s haunting me.

I remember when you held me tightly.

This pain it visits almost nightly.

Come back and mend my broken heart.

Please don’t tear it back apart.

I’ve worked so hard to get this far, living with these forever reminding scars.

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

This piece tells us an age old story. Where love has been, but now has past, but in the heart, shattered, there is hope that lasts. Wisdom breeds the action in these emotional times, the knowledge of what is best, comes out in the rhymes.

Line 4 - I think you might want to have that last words be, "means" ;)

Wolfie

[Forgotten]

Just wow, I loved the emotion and obvious link to a personal life, because thats what we all want to see, we want to see the person behaind the words as well as the soul in it, it was a great poem and i loved reading, just the title gave me urge to read it, great write =D