The purging of words is always a good way to get emotions out, before they pressurize and explode. I think everyone will be able to relate to this piece. Some in small ways, others as if they are looking in a mirror and seeing themselves. While everyone has their hard times and dips on the roller coaster of life, every thing seems to happen for a reason. While the why can be illusive, when it does appear, we realize we are wiser for the experiences we've been through.
As I read all of your poems, from oldest to newest, I could see how they step the reader through a journey of emotion and ink, of reality and heart or heartbreak. This format of poetry that flows from one to the other is a favorite of mine, as it keeps a stronger energy in the words.
My one suggestion would be, seeming as they all are related, is to post them in a book, and each poem would be a chapter. That would further aid in showing readers that it's a flowing process and a process that's still underway.
The purging of words is always a good way to get emotions out, before they pressurize and explode. I think everyone will be able to relate to this piece. Some in small ways, others as if they are looking in a mirror and seeing themselves. While everyone has their hard times and dips on the roller coaster of life, every thing seems to happen for a reason. While the why can be illusive, when it does appear, we realize we are wiser for the experiences we've been through.
As I read all of your poems, from oldest to newest, I could see how they step the reader through a journey of emotion and ink, of reality and heart or heartbreak. This format of poetry that flows from one to the other is a favorite of mine, as it keeps a stronger energy in the words.
My one suggestion would be, seeming as they all are related, is to post them in a book, and each poem would be a chapter. That would further aid in showing readers that it's a flowing process and a process that's still underway.
I'm a country girl, I write mainly poetry. I play Soccer & I enjoy singing. I love Pepsi with a straw (had to be creative) I'm in honors English classes. I'm used to be daddy's girl. more..