Noone knows

Noone knows

A Poem by chillsea

Time flies,  life goes by. 
Just starin, catch me lookin at the sky.
I'm livin, nothing's given. Life's a game only if you're winnin .
Here's words of the wise,
 
"Live life with no surprise. Cause they'll beat you down & knock you around. Watch your back, & keep what's found."

© 2011 chillsea


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It has a powerful message, I really like it but you need to work on the form. I wasn't sure how to read it and didn't really get the feel for it. If you work on that I'm sure you'll make great improvements!! And become a wonderful poet.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on August 15, 2011
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chillsea
chillsea

Elizabeth City, NC



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I'm a country girl, I write mainly poetry. I play Soccer & I enjoy singing. I love Pepsi with a straw (had to be creative) I'm in honors English classes. I'm used to be daddy's girl. more..

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A Poem by chillsea