Irreconcilable language

The unseen searched by the rays

Through the gallows the eyes ran

To the bottom it reached panting

The faded light blurred the deep

 

Unreadable deep lies underneath

You turn away from the depth

The language lies there grasped little

No one befriends! Turn the lights off!

 

Vague is the deep and irreconcilable

Throws the deep into the galleries

To the vacant galleries of faded fans,

Curves back to the crust of covers.

 

Unsung lies the deep rumoured to,

Die in the lap of turn away minds

The deep so much Inconceivable!

 To, dive to the gather the left over.

Reviews

[Rikkevi Rue]

hmm. I am still digesting this. like a snake with a mouse, it may take awhile. "unreadable deep lies the underneath, you turn away from the depth, the language lies there grasped little..." these are powerful lines, so reflective of the world in its current unaware state, hollow jest of responsible government, rapidly dropping morality, falling literacy levels..."Die in the lap of turn away minds ," indeed! The indirect and slightly obscured form of the write adds to the allure...intriguing

[Coyote Poetry]

"Vague is the deep and irreconcilable
Throws the deep into the galleries
To the vacant galleries of faded fans,"
The language and story was amazing. Your writing remind me of the great writers of the 1500-1700 style. Great detail and powerful words. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Deviant Works]

What an amazing read. "No one befriends! Turn the lights off!" and then, "Die in the lap of turn away minds". So intense and powerful with a hint of sadness and disappointment. Thank you for sharing.