love

love is a good felling but when it ends it is heartbreaking

love is a good feeling
love is b***h
love is a great feeling
love is just ish

Somtimes you want it
Sometimes you don't
Its great when you have it
It suckes when you dont

love is great
love is bad
love is fate
don't be sad

When you have love
your soul is complete
when you lose love
your soul is beat

So go ahead love someone
but you better be sure
not to hurt that
ONE

Author's Note

tell me what you think i just made it up really fast right now in art class

Reviews

[NCPanthersgurl]

I think you need to reformat, meaning put each seperate phrase on a different line. Other than that minor grammatical errors but I think you have a good start. =]

[Aly]

lmfao.
haha,im sitting one person away from you in studio art.
haha i love how she doesnt even careeee

:)

i like your poemm steven.
but jeezzz its niceee LMAO