am i still alive?

song lyrics.....but i have no music or rhythm yet......

Am I alive?
Am I still breathing?
It seems that I've lost all feeling.

Is this real,
Or I am just dreaming?
I've lost my grip.
None of this feels real,
Nothing feels like my life

Am I alive?
Am I still breathing?
It seems like I've lost all feeling.

For now I'm with you,
I should have nothing to fear.
For at your side, I'm not alone.
Won't let this fall apart,
Not this time,
I love to see you smile. But...

Am I alive?
Am I still breathing?
Have I lost all sense of feeling?

Don't worry about me,
I'll be okay.
But as they say,
If nothing was wrong,
Then nothing would be right.

It seems like I'm breathing,
It feels like I'm alive.
Do you still love me,
Or is this relationship built on lies?

Author's Note

help? it does not seem to flow enough or am i wrong....i dont really know if this could ever be song like.....

Reviews

[DansStories]

honestly, you're the one that decides the rhythm and the music if it's going to be a song, all i can do is interpret

[B A S S E M A S H R A F]

practice makes perfect

keep on writing