I Promise

i won't let any body bring me down not now not again

i don't always have the right things to say

but if you stay

i promise i'll prove them wrong

i will stand strong

i'll make you see

that we are meant to be

i may not be wonderful

i may not be perfect

but i'll try my best

to make you see

how much i love you

we'll prove them all wrong

this time this train won't wreck

we'll keep it on track

we'll keep moving on

we won't look back

if we keep looking back at the past

we'll miss the present

and won't be ready for the apoaching future

i promise to prove them all wrong

with you i will stand strong

Author's Note

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Reviews

[DanaRegen]

Thanks for entering this lovely poem in my contest, and best of luck!
I loved how you said "with you i stand strong" together forever,
together with hope and imperfection they will stand strong for eternity
very nice poem!
-Dana