never give up

just my feelings ...some of them....

I might as well give up

give up on everyone

all i do is get hurt more in the end

every time i try

my laughs turn to cries

but i just can't give all of this up

i can't always run away

not from everythingnot forever

no matter how rough times get

and as much as i want to die

i cannot just give in and give up

Anata ga daisuki desu

( I love you)

my friends and family

i cannot just leave you all behind in the dust

i am not the kind to just give up on life

 

Author's Note

comments and what ever you think please -^^-

Reviews

[Kevin]

uhmm Don't give up? No really the pain of the moment is raw and vivid. I like the way you mention leaving the family behind and your resolve in the end to carry on. The poem is well done and vivid. Thank you for sharing.