We are not going to make it

We are not going to make it

A Poem by chiisu
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yeah so um just please say some nice things...

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We are not going to make it

We cannot even fake it

My heart belongs to you

I fear that we will not make it through

We are going to fall apart

Apart at the seams

It seems we were never meant to be

Although we are together

I feel so alone

We are not going to make it

I feel so alone

You are never here

Did you even care

Anytime you change your mind

Come find me

I will still be here waiting here

All alone

Come back to me love

© 2008 chiisu


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A sad poem with lots of pain and heart ache, but well written. Small typo on the sixth line you have seems I think you meant seams. Nice write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


this is extremly good. it has alot of pain to it.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on September 23, 2008
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chiisu

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