Lip Locking

wet and fun

--Lip Locking--

Fresh bubblegum taste

Of toxic wet kissy kiss fun

In the orange blazing sun

Warm sparking tongues slide

As exploding

Pink rocket lips collide

Oh what an electric current

Body seizing

Rollercoaster ride!

Author's Note

just thoughts

Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

Love it!
The font adds to the exciting, teasing ride that the reader experiences, and I love the last 2 lines.....I'm with ya...kisses are sensuous experiences to be celebrated and long remembered......

[Kara Pols]

Nice Thoughts..!

[writing mojo]

such a sultry run of tongue play, words fertile display teething rings engaged to the cord strung in hypnotic stanza's of this poem..amazing stuff

[Eagle Cruagh]

Sfunny, Trying to remember, nope can`t
remember any body seizing.
A kiss could be described as really dirty,
disgustingly depraved and hungy, but '
body seising ? Nope .
Cute story.
----- Eagle Cruagh

[Antonio Valentino]

"As exploding

Pink rocket lips collide

Oh what an electric current

Body seizing

Rollercoaster ride!"


Isn't it! Aww now I need to go find someone to kiss!

This was great Marie, what a way to start a Saturday!
Antonio xx

[WindSong]

It's definitely bubble gum! A light and sensual write with good color, imagery and delivery!
WindSong

[Sarah Wlochal]

This is beautiful! I love the font and color that you used! I could feel and see everything that you talked about!

Cannot wait to read more from you :)

[johnnyqueer]

Love this, the font and color compliment the words so much. Nothing better than a kiss in the blazing sun, haha.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Brilliant. The color fits so well with bubble gum. I could hear lips smacking and bubbles blazing.

Kind of erotic as well. Excellent.
Very fun read too. You always make me smile and get a real good feel good feeling.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

oh yes kissing is the most intimate thing you can do and the ultimate high. What a deliciouly sexy poem.