Pinata

a stuffed poem of angst

piñata

how I wish you were

a statue of david

piñata that I could

strike over and over

with a baseball bat

 

i’d watch you sway

back and forth

and all around

with your pink guts

of bubble-gum

pieces hanging out

 

what a productive

way to spend

my day

beating the crap

out of you

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The flat-lined statment style of the poem really gets to the inner workings of the reader, you display the message clearly and without regret, well done, great read.

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

Lmao! I loved this piece! Very raw, vivid, and unique!

[light and ashes]

haha wow you have made your anger clear in this poem! Great write.

[Dayran]

Anger management with poetry. Hit it once and get it over with.