Stardust

poem

-Stardust-

Starfish drift  by

As I bleed tonight

Slowly all of my

Red plasma is

Filling up the sea

Feeding all the

Blue ocean plankton

 

 As I leave

My body for the

Circling sharks to eat

There’s nothing left

For me to keep

 

Think I’ll sail

Out of here,

Do a fly by the moon

Up in the cosmos

Kiss the face of

Heaven as I

 Evaporate into

Sparkles of

Purple stardust

 

Author's Note

Wrote this for the Poetry Inspired By Art Contest
This is what I saw when I viewed the picture.

Reviews

[light and ashes]

You painted beautiful,enchanting, and mesmerizing images in this.

[KAREN]

Made me think of magic using stardust. A beautiful write!!

[Jupiter Jazz]

Nice font. Nice wording. Nice color. Nice picture. Just nice =)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Perfect beautiful imagination!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I want to go.........awesome Marie!

[ShameemAkhtar]

Gripping end to end though I must admit the title made me think about a theme around the galaxy and not the sea...

Think I’ll sail
Out of here,
Do a fly by the moon
Up in the cosmos

Love this part, even out of despair, you show a streak of resilience, hope and desire to change destiny...

[Rene Velez]

beautiful wording...

[Dayran]

The bird of the Zodiac.

[Becky C Strukamp]

You did a wonderful job with this. Excellent imagery. This is a wonderful entry for the Poetry Inspired by Art Contest.

[Tom Benson]

I reckon you fulfilled the brief for the contest and then some. On top of which, this is evidence that your imagination is in good form.