Paper Thin Friendship

poem

Paper Thin Friendship

Computer compadres

Amigos sharing our angst

Exchanging our life stories and dreams

Overtime developing

A meaningful friendship

-        -   -

Had to leave for a few months

To attend to important life responsibilities

Creating life shifting changes in my life

Came back to write and

Share in this friendship again

 

-  -  -

 

Found myself

Mysteriously blocked

Paper thin friendship

One that blows with the wind

 

Author's Note

I was inspired by Georgia Gypsy's poem Delete...

Reviews

[Vinod Kumar U K]

nice work....

[MS. BABy]

I love these types of write, I have had the pleasure of being deleted by a fool of a woman who thought that ///...well who cares why, lol...the world of cyber friends....LOVE it Marie, and Ms.Georgia Gypsy for her inspiration...

[M Garcia]

Great and powerful write, Marie. Thanks for sharing.

[Thea]

Well structured...Quite sad but awesome piece... :)))

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Sad, but written so well! Love the title!

[Becky C Strukamp]

You know, you hit a strong reality with this one. Its brilliant. I Love the way you write.

[Rene Velez]

THAT'S A PRETTY SAD EVENT, but the poem shows the shallow side of the internet and selfish people...

[tynamite]

"One that blows in the wind." Well put. I like how the poem ends abruptly.

[...]

Wow, I loved the last stanza, made me feel kind of sad really...but nicely written.

[Chris]

Life as we live it...
Social Dynamics - 101.

Chris