Paper Thin Friendship

poem

Paper Thin Friendship

Computer compadres

Amigos sharing our angst

Exchanging our life stories and dreams

Overtime developing

A meaningful friendship

-        -   -

Had to leave for a few months

To attend to important life responsibilities

Creating life shifting changes in my life

Came back to write and

Share in this friendship again

 

-  -  -

 

Found myself

Mysteriously blocked

Paper thin friendship

One that blows with the wind

 

Author's Note

I was inspired by Georgia Gypsy's poem Delete...

Reviews

[Alicia Schroeder]

A wonderful peice :)

[JanieB]

Love this. "Paper thin friendship".. amazing words, and can be so true. Well done.

[Michael of Gilead]

Tis true

[Jibey]

People come and people go on the net... It seems I go on for ever lol

[Darkest Rose]

I love this! So true. Fab wording and awesome write! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I never delete no-one. On my Myspace site. 1500 writers and poets are hanging on hoping for the old way. People do get busy and sometime hard to find time to write and read. I like this site. Serious writers wanting to improve and learn from each other. I like the complete poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[KINGFAN]

so true..all i can say, love it

[Shep]

That's why I blow in the wind.

[ShameemAkhtar]

I like the casual style of this poem. But it ends very powerfully...

Paper thin friendship
One that blows with the wind...

Awesome

[Que]

I really liked this. It's very modern and quite different, which is good.
I think though that there is a bit of a style difference (if you can even call it that?) between the first stanza and the last two. The first is more artistic and each verse doesn't necessarily form a full sentence with the next (you know what I mean?). Whereas the other two have verses that follow one another more directly.
Don't get me wrong, despite it being a little weird to me, I really like it, I just noticed that change, lol.
So anyway, great job!
Cheers and have a good day.