Shedding Words

A Word Association Poem

Shedding Words

Colors twirling in the air of change

Pennies, quarters, nickels, dimes

Deep pockets produce space rockets

Their long legs and high kicks speak volumes

Bound by threads these words are shed

Rain trickles off the tin roof protecting fleshy peaches

 

Author's Note

This poem was a made by a stream of relationships with words
Something new for me.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You create some good visions with the poem. I like the flow and the powerful and beautiful statements. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Mauricio Montoya]

love the ideal, Great job well done.

[Thea]

Beautiful...Short but really amazing... :)))

[Jibey]

Interesting associations... and when all is shed, the bare truth is exposed...

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Beauty of words nicely connected with the nature........

[KINGFAN]

aaahhhh peaches, i think i might get the meaning, but maybe i dont lol, nicely written though

[Jupiter Jazz]

I need glasses and you send me this kind of slanted cursive to read... you're conspiring against me, aren't you?? Admit It!!

That's interesting. I had to read it a couple times to get how cool it was =)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

"Rain trickles off the tin roof protecting fleshy peaches"

Excellent imagery portrayed in this line!

[Linear]

Is this a deeply profound poem by the beautiful and elegant Marie?

I fear she wrote it on the run, and is simply poking fun :0)
Enjoyed

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interesting concept...works well