Kiss o Kiss

A smooching haiku

 

Kiss o Kiss

Tender lips touching

Warm tongues rub

And twirl about

Passions smoke with flames

Author's Note

:)

Reviews

[?]

This is passion in a few words. Sensual and warm is such a kiss

[sugar]

hahah sounds like you watched me and my boyfriend makeout lmaoo, loved it so powerfull and like great imagry

[sugar]

hahah sounds like you watched me and my boyfriend makeout lmaoo, loved it so powerfull and like great imagry

[.]

your kiss is like a dance around a fire!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I think I need a cold Shower!

[Darkest Rose]

I love this! Full of passion and very sensual! Amazing write! :) Oh and the wording is really good! :P

[Becky C Strukamp]

I agree with PoppySilver, full circle,sensual and warm. Excellent.

[Poetic Beauty]

This says a lot in a few short lines. Kissing is very intimate and personal. It is one of the most passionate things you can do.