Kiss o Kiss

A smooching haiku

 

Kiss o Kiss

Tender lips touching

Warm tongues rub

And twirl about

Passions smoke with flames

Author's Note

:)

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

this is definitely short and sweet.

[Patches I'm not so new..]

very sensual and very suggestive, nothing wrong with that I mean, after all isn't that the main reason we have been blessed with life--- so that we can pass it on?

I gave it a 98% because Haukus are among my least favorite forms of poetry

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Sensous, loving and hot. Sigh!!

[Tina Kline]

Very erotic and passionate. This is really great!

[KAREN]

Sweet and passionate, and very beautiful!!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Such good sensual descriptions!

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Oh yeah!

[Michael of Gilead]

i think, like most kisses, this hauku went a bit too far ;)

[Short.Nerd]

Nice!

[Chris]

I see the Haiku... the font breaks it apart in the available space.

I like the thoughts invoked

Chris