My Grief

mourning poem

 

My Grief

My companionship

Is unbearable

As I grieve

 

Forgive me

For there’s no relief

 

Nothing comforts

Or consoles my anxious soul

Everything’s a thorn in my side

My darkness I cannot hide

 

No quench for this mighty thirst

 Magic pills cannot subside

This sea of pain

That resides in my heart

 

I’m a slave of mourning

A raging storm of anger

And regrets

 

Time has been my thief

Robbing me of my dearest love

 

Throw me in

My pit of doom

Bury me deep

Within my tomb

Author's Note

Just thinking about what a bitch it is to grieve.
How it just pours out of your soul like an ocean.

Reviews

[Dream Weaver]

Grieving is what nobody wishes to go through, unfortunately
it's all apart of life. Dead on depth of feel here...

[Jvl narasimharao]

There is great pain in the poem

[?]

No I dont want to think about it, it hurts to much.
lol But in order to for our hearts to heal, I do believe we do have to grieve.
Just remember there's always a rainbow after the storm/rain
Well written and expressed Marie

[Becky C Strukamp]

I hear you loud and clear on this. Grieving is a b***h. Once I learned that grieving was a step to healing, I welcomed it a litttle more. BUT, its still a B***H>

Well written! I enjoyed reading it.

[Layla Anne Massaro]

Wonderful! Well written and truly great.

[Linear]

You portray grief and pain so well in this poem, great emotional poetry :0)

[Thea]

Very well expressed, Marie...This is just amazing! :)))

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Numb...totally speechless..!!

WONDERFUL..!!

[Jibey]

Gets acorss the inconsolable nature of much grief.., with its throns and pain and anger...

[M Garcia]

All so true. Great write, Marie. You can feel the pain in this poem.