My Grief

mourning poem

 

My Grief

My companionship

Is unbearable

As I grieve

 

Forgive me

For there’s no relief

 

Nothing comforts

Or consoles my anxious soul

Everything’s a thorn in my side

My darkness I cannot hide

 

No quench for this mighty thirst

 Magic pills cannot subside

This sea of pain

That resides in my heart

 

I’m a slave of mourning

A raging storm of anger

And regrets

 

Time has been my thief

Robbing me of my dearest love

 

Throw me in

My pit of doom

Bury me deep

Within my tomb

Author's Note

Just thinking about what a bitch it is to grieve.
How it just pours out of your soul like an ocean.

Reviews

[Light and ashes]

Your intense emotions are expressed so beautifully.

[MS. BABy]

this was a strong piece, a consuming one the part of us that we normally try to bury and forget exist....Thank u for this work

[Poetic Beauty]

The imagery is very strong in this piece and you have written the emotions well. many times life overwhelms us and takes us on a quite bumpy ride. that which doesn't kill us only makes us stronger. True words to live by.

[Darkest Rose]

This is amazing. So full of pain and deep emotion really. Very intense. Fab write :)

[Michael of Gilead]

This hits with a punch

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Your pen has bled such intimacy.
This poem is an invitation into your heart.

[Jupiter Jazz]

Anguish and heartache fills this poem and resonates within. Good write

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Explore the darkness, for light awaits.

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and you poured your soul into this..wonderfully melancholy

[Alicia Schroeder]

I really felt the gush of greif.. Great write..