Death Wish

A deadly poem

Death Wish

 

Really, I don’t hold many grudges

But tonight I wish you were dead!

 

Lifeless,

With your pasty white tongue

Hanging out,

And your dull eyes

Rolled-up in the

Back of your hairless head!

 

I’m willing to offer

You my forgiveness

Or at least I'll try,

As long as you

Are toes-up and

 No longer alive!

 

I’m your angry 

Black Magic Mama

Now I’m going to

Cast a nasty spell

That will cause

Your body to quickly swell-up

Rot and smell

 

Because you were no Officer

nor a Gent to me

Soon your life will be bloody spent!

 

Bulls-eye!!!

With any luck,

My love,

You’ll die a painful death tonight

Looking directly into my baby blue eyes!

 

Say your last prayers

Make all of your amends

Prepare to die

Time to kiss

Your worthless life goodbye!

 

 

 

Author's Note

Letting off a little steam. Ha!

Reviews

[Poe Redd]

*fave fave FAVE* Seriously.

[LittleMissSunshine :)]

*much

[LittleMissSunshine :)]

Honestly, you could've done so myh more with this piece.

[Mauricio Montoya]

that's the best way to do it get that rage on the page. it helps get those feeling out.
Great job well done.

[M.Babu]

I felt the anger and resentment resonating powerfully in every syllable...
Vent away anytime, I'll be glad to read it :)

~M.Babu~

[KAREN]

Love the anger in this poem! Rant and rave girl!

[Coyote Poetry]

A strong poem with some anger and some desire for revenge. I like the desire of this poem. No weakness. Just honest and direct words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[M Garcia]

I loved this! You should let some steam off about once a week. Keep writing and thanks for sharing.

[Alicia Schroeder]

Lol. This is a great rant.. Sounds like someone really made you angry..

[ForTheWorld]

wonderful poem,..harsh enough to make anyone wonder who would suffer that...beautifully written