WORDS

A cinquain

Words

Vows, Bonds

Shaming, Praising, Blending

Line between man and animals

Pleas

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

Oh, I like this. Very powerful.

[Black Cat Fever]

Is there even a line between man and animals? Nicely done. I enjoyed this, very clever.

[An owl on the moon]

What a powerful utterance in the cinquin form. This drives so deep into our lives, our existence.

[Sbernie18]

love this style of poetry. It's easy to do, but hard to do it really well. I love the way you develop so well the words into each other. The fourth line really describes it so well and really brings it together. And you ended it on a very strong and imminent note. Good job

[L]

very interesting.... I'm pondering... you made me think, which means you did a great job, no? This is a didactic cinquain I believe?

[.]

I love the idea of this..only wish that you had used another word instead of talk..it doesn't have the impact..but I think you have a thoughtful poem here

[Christina May Shanaberg]

Words rule us, harm us, praise us, etc. They separate us from beasts or are our words beasts, too?! A wonderful and precise write. Words???!!!

Not the standard cinquain of two, four, six, eight, two, but an excellent five line none rhyming write!