WORDS

A cinquain

Words

Vows, Bonds

Shaming, Praising, Blending

Line between man and animals

Pleas

Reviews

[light and ashes]

Powerful despite its brevity, and so is your subject. All of us know the power that words hold. This poem is so true. "Line between man and animals." Brilliant.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

"Line between man and animals"

Genius line!

This was the BEST line in the poem; it's so true, but I never realized it until reading this poem.

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Making only Sounds......

[Short.Nerd]

I really liked it:) I've never read a cinquain before (at least I don't think I have xD lol) Anyway very good job!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

A really cool write. Love the way one idea blends into the next. This is my first encounter with a cinquain.

[Linear]

Words of pleading needing no explanation to animals or man when lines are blurred

[Michael of Gilead]

interesting Marie, I've never much read cinquains.

[The Analog Kid]

Very succinct and powerful.

[sugar]

i had to read this agian to get it too, it was great and like powerfully inspiring

[tynamite]

I had to read this again to get it. You really put alot into this.