The Kiss

A Carpe Diem Poem

 

The Kiss

Grab life by the throat and choke

To get the girl, cross the moat, you bloke

Grab her by the face and kiss her tender lips

For tomorrow she might have a neck brace and broken hips

Chase the day, seize the night, get things right!

 

 

Author's Note

First Carpe Diem poem, with a seize the day message
Let me know what you think?

Reviews

[KAREN]

very nice, well written! Love the ending line.

[Sbernie18]

Very well written as well. Very blunt and conveys the point nicely too

[Darkest Rose]

I adore this poem! I love how you rhyme and word this amazing piece! 'Chase the day, seize the night, get things right' Was my favourite line! I love the message you got across here about having to seize things to get them, because really if you don't your going to regret it. Fab write :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I loved it, it's got punch with attitude! Excellent

[Short.Nerd]

Awesome!

[sugar]

wooow this was short but great very well pened...keep it comin:)

[knightcall]

The meter in this is done very well. A sense of fun has seeped into this message. There are a lot of things going on in this short poem, and theyre all good. Very nice.

[Becky C Strukamp]

You definitely seized the day. Excellent wording. I liked it a lot.

[Jibey]

Grab the day... Yes!

[A Risen Heroine.]

Nice poem, and good message.
I like it a lot!

~A Fallen Heroine~