The Kiss

A Carpe Diem Poem

 

The Kiss

Grab life by the throat and choke

To get the girl, cross the moat, you bloke

Grab her by the face and kiss her tender lips

For tomorrow she might have a neck brace and broken hips

Chase the day, seize the night, get things right!

 

 

Author's Note

First Carpe Diem poem, with a seize the day message
Let me know what you think?

Reviews

[LittleMissSunshine :)]

I understand it...
but I find the idea rather creepy.
The fact that you used the word "bloke" and "moat" completely offset the balance of this piece.

If you had taken this one a little more4 seriously, it might have turned out better/

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Good poem.

[MS. BABy]

MMHHM...I do understand

[sarah]

Take the time to appreciate the people that surround you! I like this write great work!

[Tina Kline]

It gets right to the point! Great job!

[Art Sun]

nice work Marie...

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

No procrastination! Lovely!

[Linear]

Well its differant, broken hips and swinging .... Tender lips taste slender .....
Enjoyed Marie :0)

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great poem. I like the idea behind it.

[?]

Im sorry this made me chuckle a bit, in a good way not bad.
lol
Loved it Marie, loved the rhyming