Pelagic Pleas

a haiku

Pelagic Pleas

Riptides force me down

Gasping for breath of flesh gain

Barnacles taunt me

 

Shark fins writhe and pitch

Mermaids of the sea circle

King Neptune redeems

 

Author's Note

Something different for me

Reviews

[Poe Redd]

I feel the clour blue and the waves overhead, hear it all. Gorgeous.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Nice work!

[Poetic Beauty]

The ocean can be tranquil and quiet as well as fierce and unpredictable.

[bba]

This will be a great short story! XD

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Different, but it's great! Fabulous imagination going on!

[KAREN]

Great imagery, a solid write!

[JanieB]

I like this alot. Haikus are fun. Bravo.

[Linear]

Somethings fishy here.
Pelagic seas far from coast, rolling waves swallow me whole

[tynamite]

What was you thinking when you wrote this?

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Who Marie. This is fantastic writing.
What a dream come true. Your imagination
is priceless.