Earth's Temptress, Lady Fire

A scorching poem

Earth’s Temptress, Lady Fire

Gyrating in her haunting

And violent shapes

To some evil melodic beat

 

Raging and roaring

This hot tempered beast

 

Restless heart

Of searing flames

 

She’s come to savagely

Lick the damned

Scorch the oppressed

 

She’s constantly

Twisting and contorting

As she sizzles and pops

 

Her temperature rising,

Melting mighty steel

Into small liquid pools

And bursting thick beer bottles

Into tiny shards of glass

 

She’s a raving b***h to handle

A wicked siren

That’s out of control

 

She’ll kick leagues

Of men in the a*s

When trying to quench

Her undying thirst

 

She’s a blaze of fire

Earth’s precious temptress

Lady element of heat

Mistress of Fire

Author's Note

I wrote this for the fire contest
I love to watch fire.
Fire relaxes me and takes me to another world.

Reviews

[?]

ouch sizzle sizzle (fasizzle)
Man talk about a scorcher.
She’ll kick leagues
Of men in the a*s
Thats a good one, love what Linear had to say. lol
Very well written
I agree watching the flames of a fire can be relaxing.
Thanks for sharing this with me, I really enjoyed this hot one.

[Poetic Beauty]

I love how you make fire a woman and could describe a temptress or flames themselves. This is darkly provocative and stunning. I can almost feel the inferno blazing

[Starry Eyed]

Im... WOAHED!

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

This burned into my soul; and I could see and feel every bit of it. Great job~

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

:)
made me smile...
Fire is a powerful companion and inspiration

[Linear]

Yeah I once went out with her, she Tried to quench my desire with her eternal fire but we just flew higher and higher till our pants caught fire. It was a pyrotecnic experience like your poem. :0) excellently written

[dangerbooze]

That....is awesome. -in shock and awe-

She’ll kick leagues
Of men in the a*s
When trying to quench
Her undying thirst

Definitely my favorite part :)