Happy Trails In The Sun

Teen poem

Happy Trails In The Sun

Basking in the sun

Reading how the West was won

Filled with gold, cowboys, and guns

Wishing I was the squaw of brave Indian

 

My life’s just begun

I’m just learning while I’m young

Reading all of the books that I can learn from

Hanging out with friends and having fun

 

Love has yet to come undone

For now I just use my imagination

Happy trails is the song that is sung

As I ride off into the setting sun

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[M.Babu]

This is written with such a young ish tinge to it...the tone really authenticates the message and the placement.

What a remarkable read...left a fleeting happiness in me.

Nicely done :)

~M.Babu~

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

This is so uplifting and warm.
I love how you deplicted this as a teen's point of view. Which was perfect for me~
Wonderful job~

[Michael of Gilead]

Now i'll have that damn tune in my head all day ;)

[Linear]

Indian sunsets made out of gold
A love on the range for you to hold
Having so much fun in the sun
And a lovely poem for me to hum


Always good to read your thoughts Marie

[M Garcia]

Great write, Marie. Loved the flow and the message.

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

This was good, like a little song in itself. I loved the ending, still filled with hope. Love it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like those words. "Happy trails." Old words that mean a lot if we try to understand life journey. Better to be content and look for the good in a life. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Wow this was beautiful and an adventure of life!

[tynamite]

I like the picture painted by these words.

[Hiroko]

Wonderful. I can picture what you have written, it is so vivid, and so hopeful, its really a pretty picture you have painted through these words!