Snow Cone

A summer poem

Snow Cone

Lime green, sweet snow cone

Your tangy taste takes me home

 

Back to the days when I was so carefree

 To jump in the pool after your mind numbing freeze

 

You bring me pleasure

You make me smile

One taste of you

 Takes me a million miles

 

You leave me with a fluorescent grin

You make me feel young again

Reviews

[Thea]

I enjoyed reading this! Good poem! :)))

[CyndiR]

Snow cone! Honestly, I'd never tried one, and you'd made me wonder about it! I like the realistic in your poem, I think I got that taste actually! Its a cool off to have a snow cane, so icy!
Wonderful Job!
~CyndiR

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. Hard to find a real snow cone. The small things can bring back good memories. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[light and ashes]

A good poem, enjoyable to read. I can almost taste it.

[Jibey]

A kind of cool poem in all the heat right now

[tynamite]

This is really nice to read. Reminds me of summer.