Snow Cone

A summer poem

Snow Cone

Lime green, sweet snow cone

Your tangy taste takes me home

 

Back to the days when I was so carefree

 To jump in the pool after your mind numbing freeze

 

You bring me pleasure

You make me smile

One taste of you

 Takes me a million miles

 

You leave me with a fluorescent grin

You make me feel young again

Reviews

[M.Babu]

What a perfectly timed finished.

Nice job on this.

~M.Babu~

[Mauricio Montoya]

sounds good right now!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Lovely. Brings back memories for sure, the kind where you could run outside for hours in bare feet and burn yourself severely on metal playground equipment. Memories for sure.

[STAR CHILD]

oh i like this it sounds delious

[JanieB]

Sweet and innocent write.

[?]

Awww those were the days, young, carefree, and eating those snow cones.
Loved this piece, made my warm day feel a little cooler.

[M Garcia]

Snow cones are wonderful on a warm day and remind me of the county fair. Thank you for such a great memory. Keep writing.

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

'fluorescent grin' what a nice way to put it :)
This was so cute :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great cool refreshing poem!

[Short.Nerd]

I love this because I loe snow cones. Excellent job!