CREEP

A rude poem

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Creep

 

Tall ugly weed

How you spread your seed

Pretending to do good deeds

Oh, how you’d love to lead

But you’re too

Packed with greed

Harboring too many needs

You lack what it takes to succeed

 

Author's Note

I'm sorry, I couldn't help myself. Ha!

Reviews

[Patches I'm not so new..]

That's ok Marie some consider daffodills and dandilions as weeds life is full of weeds you have to cultivate the ones you believe are flowers. and pull the others after all life is only a garden

[TAO]

You really hate weeds...or...sound like it's time to cull the herd. Nice.

[Karina Longo]

That's such a smart, cynical piece of writing. I like it!

[Jibey]

You use the weed image effectively...