CREEP

A rude poem

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Creep

 

Tall ugly weed

How you spread your seed

Pretending to do good deeds

Oh, how you’d love to lead

But you’re too

Packed with greed

Harboring too many needs

You lack what it takes to succeed

 

Author's Note

I'm sorry, I couldn't help myself. Ha!

Reviews

[sarah]

Oh yes many creeps very much like this! great write!

[Norma M Sutton]

Creep indeed!

[Sean M. Addams]

liked this alot ...nice rhyme and well expressed ... nice job..

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Lovely rhyme and you created such beauty in something ugly, like a weed. Wonderful job!

[Moflo]

This was good! I love how you were able to rhyme every line...very creative! Good job!

[The Analog Kid]

I know who this is intended to speak to...

Powerful and direct...lol

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Weeds ... good series ! Your poem is cutting and sharp and yes, I too know people like this ... "Harboring too many needs .. You lack what it takes to succeed"
Wonderful couplet.

Chloe

[Liza]

love it - wise! stingy and greedy - a bad combination!

[cfix]

You go girl!!!!
This is just so truthful write.
I know someone like this myself. I like this too much.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

No need to explain... that was quite an in your face, you are a disgrace write... I know people like that.