Love

Senyru of love

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Love

I anticipate

Sparks fly when you look at me

Passion blooms in me

 

Reviews

[Ashley]

aww i love it! 100/100

[SpokenWord]

First what a stunning picture. An excellent job on the haiku one that defines love eloquently within the confines of rules and syllables.

[Tate Morgan]

I love this

[hannajade]

wow!! Writing poems like this can be hard but you hit it!!

I notice you said it was a senyru, and am wondering if a senyru is the same as a hakiu? Looks the same:)

[Zachary_James]

Sadd

[Buddhistboy73]

Great picture....:)
so much to be said and felt in so few words here...once again you capture the essence of what the reader sees.....and has experienced in their life at some point....thereby connecting us in one big loop!
nice work....:)

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Beautiful!

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful words and photo. When someone make us crazy in love. Take but a smile and to be able to look into beautiful eyes. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[JanieB]

Wonderfully written haiku.

[Chelsea]

Aw, this was just beautiful! Not sickly sweet like most but just sweet! A great poem.
I know how I feel when a guy I like looks at me, passion really does bloom!
Nicely done, love your poems!