Making Camping Smores

A sticky poem.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

MakingCampingSmores

Embers burn slowly

Stories swapped around campfire

Hearts fused together

 

 

Reviews

[Some Random Person.]

good one! I would never think to use s'mores for a poem, but you pulled it off!

[sarah]

You are so good at hikue's I am jealous lol great work!

[Poetic Beauty]

There is something wonderful about sitting around a camp fire to stay warm and eating smores. Makes you feel like a kid again.

[Norma M Sutton]

And blood sugar soars lol. I like it.

[M.Babu]

I like how few words you use to convey something that would take me pages.
Direct, concise and very absolute...that's how i'd term your poetry. I liked how a homely picture formed in my head after reading your well chosen words. They portray an environment of happiness and merrymaking that everyone highly enjoys!
Great brevity, stunningly beautiful piece!

[Short.Nerd]

Love it!

[Coyote Poetry]

I love food. Smore is pretty high up on my favorite list. A very good poem. I need to find time for a fire and friendship. And of course to make some smores. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Linear]

Smore! what the heck is a smore?

[Tina Kline]

I love camping and making smores. You did a wonderful job on this and I appreciate that it brought to mind my happy memories of camping.

[Wicahpi]

Delightful! I miss those days of old :)