Venice Love Rising

A romance poem

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Venice Love Rising

Under Bridge of Sighs

Gondola passion kissing

Aqua green sea swells

 

Reviews

[Ladysue]

Exquisite feel and meter to this piece.. so romantic...I loved Venice...always a pleasure to read...

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Beautiful poem!

[KAREN]

Beautiful work of art! The picture fits this poem prefectly as well!

[SpokenWord]

5,7,5 perfect example.

I was never good at writing these, mine have no meaning so I don't post them or they don't make sense. Yours is perfect and it makes sense as well. Nice job.

[Jim Parson]

The timing for this is perfect! I was just listening to Robin Trower not two hours ago doing Bridge of Sighs. It must be some kind of omen...I guess I'd better start planning that Italy trip!

[Jibey]

Lovely picture and wordds that evoke the romantic scene so well

[Michael.]

I generally don't like short poems(and that hasn't changed in this case)but it is like you read this and a thousand images flash in your head.
You know, Its like there's a whole story hidden in just fourteen words.

[AloysiaVerben]

Short and sweet, easy to understand and somehow sooo descriptive with just a few words... Great!

[Akshat♥]

Last is awesome..
short and sweet..
nice description in so little words:)

[Fran Marie]

Great piece~ words and pictue a perfect match blissfully romantic!!