Forever Good-bye

A departing poem

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Forever Good-bye

He held me closely

In the gentle rain

 

His blue eyes poured

Love into mine

 

His warm sweet lips

Kissed me so softly

 

As the spring rain trickled down

Our passion rose

 

Without words but a warm embrace,

He said good-bye before I boarded the train

 

We knew our lips

Would never touch again

 

Reviews

[Cynthia]

Its so bitter sweet. Loving the one you know you cannot love/or see again, thats suck. departing with the one one love should be the worst feeling ever! And you had gave us a really good painting of it, nice !

[Robin]

emotionally charged writing ...

[D.J. Lutz]

but hope springs eternal that they would someday be reunited. Very nice!

[Abbie]

aw this is also so sweet 100/100

[Poetic Beauty]

This is romantic and very sad at the same time.

[KAREN]

Very romantic with a mix of sadness!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Omg..This is romantic beyond words.
I love it.

[Dilan Gray]

That is so romantic and so sad. You did so well painting this picture. I love this poem, it was so beautiful! Great job!

[sarah]

awwww so sad!! This is so sad but awesome at the same time!

[OT]

a sad tale - the parting - tragic write!! but a nice poem!!