Forever My Muse

Romance poem

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

“Forever My Muse”

A charming muse

You are,

My Sweet

 

In my dreams

Always smiling at me

With your dimples

 

As I sleep in peace

Forever I’ll see you

Walking with me

Along the windy beach shores

Collecting sandy sea treasures

 

Waking in the morn

I’ll forever weep,

Asking when shall I feel

You gently

Rest my head against

Your beating chest again

 

How will you

spend hours

Sketching the curvy

Shadows of my body

To hang like art

As you did before

 

When it rages

With storms outdoors

I still worry

You’ll melt like

Powdered sugar

On my tongue

 

In a crowd of people

I find myself

Still searching for your

Masculine face and tall form

 

In my sleep

I always

Smell your fresh

Amber wood scent

As I feel your warm

Hands cupping my breasts

 

Forever I’ll seek

Inspiration for life

From my memories

Of you

 

I’ll always see you

Guiding me through life, my Love

 

With your body

I fit like a glove

 

 

Reviews

[Liza]

heartfelt declaration and submission of comittment ~ forever muse is a difficult shoe to fill but we all reach to be it and see it :)

[Michael of Gilead]

"When it rages
With storms outdoors
I still worry
You’ll melt like
Powdered sugar
On my tongue"

This one stanza needs work, to me...I'm not sure why you are worrying?
otherwise nicely done

[OT]

a very tender, well written piece!! nice!!!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Lovely..!!

[Art Sun]

A nice poetic thought...such a lovely muse...

enjoyed....

[KAREN]

Beautiful and full of tender love!

[Arsenic Nemesis]

Passionate and just generally wonderful - I love it, keep up the good work~

[emmajoy]

Romance and passion, naughty wonderful thoughts, memories and desires .. you put it as it is - or should be.

[Disillusioned]

awwwwww

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The power of love is an unstoppable force and a great source of inspiration... such a lovely poem.