Forever My Muse

Romance poem

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

“Forever My Muse”

A charming muse

You are,

My Sweet

 

In my dreams

Always smiling at me

With your dimples

 

As I sleep in peace

Forever I’ll see you

Walking with me

Along the windy beach shores

Collecting sandy sea treasures

 

Waking in the morn

I’ll forever weep,

Asking when shall I feel

You gently

Rest my head against

Your beating chest again

 

How will you

spend hours

Sketching the curvy

Shadows of my body

To hang like art

As you did before

 

When it rages

With storms outdoors

I still worry

You’ll melt like

Powdered sugar

On my tongue

 

In a crowd of people

I find myself

Still searching for your

Masculine face and tall form

 

In my sleep

I always

Smell your fresh

Amber wood scent

As I feel your warm

Hands cupping my breasts

 

Forever I’ll seek

Inspiration for life

From my memories

Of you

 

I’ll always see you

Guiding me through life, my Love

 

With your body

I fit like a glove

 

 

Reviews

[E.H. Monroe]

This is that love dripper with a little taste of nasty at the end.
Kind of almost tongue in cheek.
Giving someone a credit like searching for an inspiration like you got from them is heavy and full of hearts.

Nicely done

[Dream Weaver]

Very pristine in its entirety, well written with
allusions of adulation and emotion…

[Moflo]

Wow this was fantastic! The images were excellent and almost dream like, really carries the reader away on a journey. Great poem.

[Tina Kline]

Love can inspire such greatness and the absence of it can as well, but just at the opposite end of the emotional scale. Great write, I love it.

[Dracon4]

love the last lines especially!:)

[D.J. Lutz]

truer love hath no other words, me thinks.

[SR Urie]

Goodness Marie, you must be such a wonderful lover that I'm blushing (and other stuff).
Muuaaah!! BZ

[HopelesslyDevoted]

awwww!!! this is so awesome!

[Alicia™]

I like the story of this… It's very interesting, and makes me wonder what it's about. I can relate to it in certain bits since my muse is all over the place, haha.

[Cynthia]

its such a romantic and beautiful write! Aw.. I love it! And the imagery is great, and it flows great, actually, all of your poem flows nice.
Amazing! What a wonderful write!