A Winter Pond Fantasy

A winter fantasy

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Winter Pond Magic

 

Pink cheeked cherubs frolic and spin

With angelic white swans on the icy pond today

Grace has entered their souls on this snowy

White winter day of the New Year

 

Twinkling chimes and whimsical tunes fill their

Hearts as they glide along on the chilly waters

Forming beautiful views for my joyous eyes to watch

 

Blue skies and sunlight hover above

Causing the pond to glisten and sparkle with the

Magic of their mystical moments of fun

 

 

Author's Note

I had this fantasy early one morning while dog walking. All I could do to stay warm. What do you think?

Reviews

[KAREN]

Love it, beautiful! Great imagery!

[Short.Nerd]

Love it!

[D.J. Lutz]

Very nice descriptives. I can see it myself in my mind's eye. We should all be on the lookout for such places!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

chilling fantasy, wonderfully expressed! very good!

[Cynthia]

Its wonderful, I love how you show me wonter is, aside for what I think ( cold, freezing and make people sick wonter), you have created a wonderful picture in mind!

[Tina Kline]

This is very very beautiful. It shows the beautiful side of winter.

[Poetic Beauty]

I read this poem this morning. It is a wonderful winter time poem filled with a snowy delight. Although I don't like the winter it is beautiful to see the sun glistening on the snow and at lake

[Chelsea]

Really well done Marie :) I love the picture you created in my mind. You have this imagery thing down!
I love winter, my favourite season, you just confirmed it with this poem!
:)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

What a beautiful picture you wrote us!

[Ashley]

very well written