Full Cup

A bountiful life

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Full Cup

Bountiful magenta wine of life

Pours freely from my pitcher

Bubbly

            Full of fizz

                                At times

When flat tastes good with rye

 

Soon this pitcher will empty

What will become of me

Shall I sail out to the sea

Where my soul will

Run free

Author's Note

Just a thought I had the other day. It's a simple thought but I had to share it. What do you think?

Reviews

[Abbie]

Very good kinda ryhmes was that on purpose? But still very good.

[Arabdha]

life and afterlife are two things that cross everyone's mind..life cause we live it..afterlife cause we have to face at some point of life..this one somehow brings back these two thoughts to me again..

[Michael of Gilead]

guess it depends on how deep and full your pitcher is ;)

[AloysiaVerben]

I like this. Alot! :) It's very good. The best things come from simple thoughts. Thanks for sharing.

[Jibey]

I like the sense of the cupful of red life - but it will give you a migraine!

[Mauricio Montoya]

nice work.

[E.H. Monroe]

Simple?
Humbug. You're a bad liar. This is as complex thought as can come from a Monday morning s**t charade of why do we get up in the morning.
Isaw it as where will we be?
Just like the wine in a glass when it all spill sout or when we finish our cup, a la christ, that eternal ocean will be our resting place?
S**t. WHo the hell knows. I get to be captian though.

[Liza]

thirsty....in every way....ignited from this write -

[Beth Wilcox]

I love this! Very well writen!

[Dische]

I like this