Tangerine Sunfish

An Asian fantasy poem

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Tangerine Sunfish

Light eastern clouds of billow

Blowing my troubles away

 

 

As I float off on

My tangerine sunfish

In a sparkling amber sea

Of warm sake

 

 

Strings of a lonely

Mandolin serenade me

As I slowly drift away

Into my last setting sun

On the west horizon

 

 

Setting sail

To explore my

Mandarin dreams

And geisha wishes

In peace

 

Hoping to set

My soul free

In a light aqua green

Sea foam halo

 

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Such a peaceful little sail on the sea! I loved it!

[Arsenic Nemesis]

Loved this, really well written and simply wonderful. I loved it, keep up the good work!~

[emmajoy]

This took me somewhere from dreary winter into serene, sweet surroundings .. would love to see a Japanese scroll pic with it ..

What extraordinary metaphors you've used .. ' And geisha wishes ~ In peace '

[Dream Weaver]

Lovely imagery painted upon a canvas of dreams...

[Mauricio Montoya]

Such a peaceful set here, great job.

[Undying Glory]

this was really great work, beautiful sure is right in this poem. this was really picturesque work. i agree with Cynthia, this description here is really great, like a postcard actually.
"Hoping to set

My soul free

In a light aqua green

Sea foam halo"
i just love those words!

[Cynthia]

what a romantic poem! You bring me into a beautiful view and journey, the details you have given make this so relaxing and interesting, and it flow very nicely! And its such a dreamy write, I wish I can be there too!

[Coyote Poetry]

A very beautiful poem. Took me with you on a very nice field trip. The other parts of the world seem more peaceful and less complicated. Great words and description took me to a good place. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tina Kline]

Very exotic and romantic. Love the feel for far off places your words painted. Very nice!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

What a beautiful vacation. I want to go!