Tangerine Sunfish

An Asian fantasy poem

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Tangerine Sunfish

Light eastern clouds of billow

Blowing my troubles away

 

 

As I float off on

My tangerine sunfish

In a sparkling amber sea

Of warm sake

 

 

Strings of a lonely

Mandolin serenade me

As I slowly drift away

Into my last setting sun

On the west horizon

 

 

Setting sail

To explore my

Mandarin dreams

And geisha wishes

In peace

 

Hoping to set

My soul free

In a light aqua green

Sea foam halo

 

Reviews

[JanieB]

Absolutely delightful. I love the title too.

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Great imagery, beautiful portriat painted here....Lovely job!

[YouoweYoupay]

Yes, I agree great imagery, really enjoyed the serene Eastern atmosphere. Beautifully written. Thanks for posting.

-Wela.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good...!!!!

[Michael of Gilead]

Great imagery here....if i didnt know better i'd a thought I was trippin again ;)

[Short.Nerd]

Wonderful!

[Norma M Sutton]

I like the use of color in this one. It is full of bright and happy colors.

[tynamite]

I like this one. It's very tranquil and peaceful.

[KAREN]

Beautiful poem and great imagery! Feel like sailing away! Your poems takes me places!

[master squiggles]

A very pretty and peaceful poem. Beautiful!