Together Forever

A poem to a man's long lost love.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Together Forever

Hearing the waves crash

Against these rocky shores

 

It’s still you that

I adore, me amore

 

You I long to see walk

Through my door

 

My lotus heart opens

To your butterfly once more

 

As I lay my head to sleep

I pray deeper than before

 

That the Lord

Will restore

 

Between us

What has been

Done and torn

 

I meet you in my sea of dreams

Caressing your angel face

 

Dressed as a princess

With the sweetest candor

You’re still the

One that I adore

 

As I walk along

This rocky desolate shore

 

Be my lover

Once more

 

Let’s be kinder to each other

Than before

 

Together we'll

Be forever,

Me Amore

 

Author's Note

A love poem to a man's lover, he can't live without her. His heart breaks each day that they are apart. He walks the lonely shore all day, thinking of his long lost love.

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Classic and Romantic.
Loved it!

[Arsenic Nemesis]

Very beautiful, I love this a lot. Really well written and structured - keep up the good work!~

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

This was beautiful, deep, and saddish. Brilliant!

[emmajoy]

Such sad, strong feeling and beautifully formatted. There's more to this than actually the reader sees .. possibly.

[Undying Glory]

this was very deep and sweet love you've interwoven into this great poem! i just loved this awesome write, so great work here!
"Dressed as a princess

With the sweetest candor

You’re still the

One that I adore"
such amazing imagery in this one! good job!

[D.J. Lutz]

Very nice poem. You can feel the unrequited love, longing for resolution.

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

very romantic....i really love it so much..the way this lovely words rhyme with each other has got me loving this poem so much and i also love genuineness of this poem...making me believe this poem now making this poem so believable that if you recite this to your crush she will kiss you because she got goose bumps hearing such a heart captive poem dedicated to her.......BRILLIANT WORK!!

won't you mind entering this contest :LWA's Valentine Poem of 2011
http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/LWA%27s-Valentine-Poem-of-2011/12684/

because there is a great possibility that this poem could win and be LWA's Valentine Poem of 2011

[Jibey]

Hope springs eternal - and distance lends enchantment... aw... it's so hard to give up on a broken past and stop dreaming that one day it might mend... I loved the image of the lotus heart opening to the butterfly, penetrating to find the sweet nectar within

[Cynthia]

aw, thats sad but so loving! I Love the feeling and the love deep inside this poem! The closing staza is amazing! I love the story in your poem very much! A Very sad love to me :D

[Moflo]

This came out really well. I really like the honesty and the exposing of feelings deep inside to someone the narrator really cares about. Great work.