Open Up!

A urgent poem of love

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Open Up!

Whirlwind love is at your door

Moaning, she’s stirring wanting more

Aching for you to pour, pour and pour

Gooey, sweet like a melting smore

She’s the woman you adore

Another night of Egyptian cotton in store

Howling at the moon is a folklore

But not the swirling doves of the Irish moor

 

 

Reviews

[Moflo]

Fantastic rhymes here. And you paint such nice images, I pictured taking in what you see for full effect as it is always beautiful. Good write.

[Cynthia]

Very sweet! And the rhyme of this poem is just amaizng! It flows well as I read it and it seems it sings in my heart as well!

[Black Cat Fever]

Romantic and very passionate. Love the imagery, pour pour and pour...

[Nothing Personal]

Wow..You had me with pour , pour and pour..I like some of the metaphoric idea you put in as well..Short but Good write :-)

[Short.Nerd]

Great job!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

simply beautiful!!

[Jibey]

Some interesting images... the pouring, the gooey sweet stuff, the Egyptian cotton, the moon, the doves with their soft breasts, the Irish moor... Intriguing and exciting