Open Up!

A urgent poem of love

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Open Up!

Whirlwind love is at your door

Moaning, she’s stirring wanting more

Aching for you to pour, pour and pour

Gooey, sweet like a melting smore

She’s the woman you adore

Another night of Egyptian cotton in store

Howling at the moon is a folklore

But not the swirling doves of the Irish moor

 

 

Reviews

[Sunny Skye]

Beutiful very romantic. Good Job!

-SkyeBlanco-

[Tina Kline]

Very romantic with a nice touch of the erotic. This piece is really really good!

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Beautiful and amazing, all your work amazes me. You're a true poet.

[KAREN]

Beautiful and brilliant write! Great flow!!

[D.J. Lutz]

Your choice of the word "Another" says so much. Loved it. This could be deceptive to the novice reader (of which I am only slightly distanced...) in that the rhyming scheme almost distracts from what you are saying, then at the end - it hits you. And its awesome.

[Arsenic Nemesis]

Beautiful, stunning and OIWSMNOFNIIGN is how I describe your wondrous writing, everything is just perfect - keep it up!~

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Another Gem...
Nice work, Sweet Marie!
I love the flirty energy.

[Linear]

Oh please yes please just give me more, dont leave me on this lonely shore, just your lips to leave a print on cheek, oh please yes please give me more, and I promise you i shall not snore. lol

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. The words were alive and the statements filled with hope and life. Made me want to howl at the moon and dance on a beach. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Mauricio Montoya]

you do a great job in puting these simple words together.
awesome!