I'm Back To Stay

A poem of awakening from a long slumber

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I’m Back To Stay!

Oh no world, be careful!

Out of control to stay

Full speed ahead in a powerful way

Got my mojo back and it isn’t going away

No lack of energy for me today

I’m back in this world to stay

Watch out, I’m barreling down the alley

Get out of my way!

 

Author's Note

I changed my diet, I've been eating foods that give me energy for the last few days. I feel so much better. I have much more energy. Colors in the world seem brighter. I hear the birds singing in the morning. I feel like my old self again. It's amazing!

Reviews

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

i love the way the poem attacked me....attacked me with positivity, hope and energy:) indeed a great poem!

[Shalini Dinesh]

its like an energy dose, full of enthusiasm and hope, nice write...

[Jibey]

Hey... watch out everybody... What a lovely bright burst of words... the sap is rising...

[Cynthia]

a very positive poem, I wonder what will the people think who is on a un-natural diet think, you know, joing the courses which say they will loses by eating nothing then some bread they offer them (But thoses people is very slim already!)? And yes, we need to depends on our body health to set the diet! Very beautiful and a nice poem!

[Moflo]

I love the concept of being "back in the world to stay." Something about that just suggests shear optimism and happiness. I think this is a nice write. Good job.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. People under-rate their diet. I was sick for almost a year. I drink the cranberry juice and eat no bad food. Cure my pain and I feel good. Body need a good cleaning and keep the bad stuff away. A excellent poem. I like the energy and hope.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Such an inspirational piece... so much peep and positive energy... that energy has transfered into your writing as well.